Melvina Germain

(563) An Awesome View

It was a cool night with a slight drizzle in the air.
I stood at the hilltop and was in awe while standing there.
In the distance a rainbow formed, colors beautiful and bright.
I was amazed at this extraordinary awesome sight.

I see mirrors within the still waters, a half moon toward the sky.
I see shadows of large creatures gliding slowly by.
The colours are vivid with tints of periwinkle blue,
and vibrant dashes of mauve sparingly coming through.

A lip formation of moss resting upon a soft face of sand,
welcomes the touch of the Lord's glorious divine hand.
I picture the eye of God in that half moon up above,
sending showers of heavenly tears to all with his love.

The vast ocean resonates with tranquil, serene peace,
yet powerful enough to devour the largest of all beasts.
The Lord has so much love to share with all of you.
God's gift to man are these wondrous awesome views.

Topic(s) of this poem: nature

Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 23, 2007
Poem Edited: Thursday, January 21, 2016

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  • Akhtar Jawad (1/21/2016 7:49:00 AM)

    It's all a game of unconscious, where our uncalled fears and unfulfilled desires are reshaped in dreams. We all see such dreams when we are not enjoying a deep sleep. A good poetess like Melvina Germain is capable enough to describe such dreams in a great poem like this. It's a wonderful poem.

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (10/20/2015 1:51:00 AM)

    The Lord has so much to share with you.
    i saw mirrors within the still waters. what a fine expression. your poetic vision and expressions are amazing. thank you dear Poetess

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  • Mj Lemon (10/16/2015 11:13:00 PM)

    You've taken me to that place. A truly wonderful work, now among my favourites...

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  • Akhtar Jawad (8/1/2015 11:06:00 AM)

    I salute to your descriptive power, I salute to the universality of messages you convey, I salute to your poetry! ...10

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  • Ramesh RaiRamesh Rai (7/5/2015 3:41:00 AM)

    Gifts of God are unique and splendorous. In my poem The Hymn of mercy I have stated Divine Charity. Beautiful poem..Love your ink. Thanks for sharing. Regards.

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  • Charles Garcia (9/7/2007 8:52:00 PM)

    Melvina:
    Your message comes through very clearly. well done;
    I can attest to the validity of his pressence.
    Charles Garcia

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  • Marvin Brato (9/4/2007 4:46:00 AM)

    'God's gift to man are these wondrous awesome views'..... sumarizes the wonderful creations of God which you have laid opened to us in full view, reminding us of His love, made us realized our inequities and our insensitivity towards our fellowmen. In this poem you also have taught us that life is worth living if we only learn to appreciate what God
    has done for us. Great poem Melvina! Highest Marks. You are an inspiration to us all.Thank you.

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  • Malgorzata Mika (9/3/2007 6:32:00 AM)

    In your poem you managed to depict the beauty of the nature, the miracle of life that surrounds us.This was the most beautiful gift that God, the creator of humanity, could give to His creatures...And I can feel all these things in your poem :)

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  • Ivor Hogg (9/1/2007 3:03:00 AM)

    The creator designed all things to be interconnected and inter dependent.But few of us are granted the ability to stand back and see Mans free will often leads him astray following success at any price.Blinkering his eyes to what he has and what is provided freely for him
    You must have time to stand and stare and just to BE

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  • JoAnn McGrathJoAnn McGrath (8/30/2007 9:40:00 PM)

    Yes you make us stop and think here of all that there is that he has made for us...takes your breath away...nice one Mel: O)

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  • Alison Cassidy (8/30/2007 5:40:00 PM)

    This is a highly imaginative response to a perfect example of nature's beauty. It is the role of the poet to show the rest of the world about such spectacular moments of wonder. You have certainly fulfilled your role par excellence, Melvina. Thanks for sharing this. love, Allie xxxx

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  • Duncan Wyllie (8/30/2007 8:54:00 AM)

    And sat here, I think that I have an intensely beautiful veiw indeed, wonderful scenes and
    all so well put together in this lovely poem
    Thankyou for sharing it
    Take care
    Love duncan X

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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (8/29/2007 5:22:00 PM)

    That is the most brilliant and magnificent exopositiopn of nature`s gifts in the midst of blessing Almighty to the mankind over this planet in all ages and eons and we do exist, stand, stare to the blazzing glory of nature`s beauty and we do revel upon ecstatically, .The poem evokes a unique and awesome architectural panorama of Nature studded with its ravishing beauty in the plexus of peace, love and serinity that thrills and thrums us all along yet exalted love divine, a great i do adore and admire

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  • Shelley L Baxter-stanley (8/29/2007 2:04:00 PM)

    Amazing work! I seen it all with each word you wrote so well, , , so eloquently! You have such a gift of uplifting others and bringing them to the feet of God just by how you express yourself!
    Melvina over the last ten days I saw so many of Gods great beautiful wonders in nature! From the mountains to the streams, creeks and cloud formations which settled so amazingly on a picturesqe skies of blues, purples and red. Nature heals and God heals...the two of these go hand and hand so perfectly!
    Thank you for sharing your view in this beautiful poem! !
    Ten out of 10!
    Wishing you all the best
    =Shelley=

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  • Risha : Ahmed (8/29/2007 11:34:00 AM)

    This is a very beautiful and touching poem. Loved it.
    Love you....................Risha

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  • WILFRED JOHN (8/28/2007 9:11:00 PM)

    Dear Melvina Germain,

    a well written good poem
    we expect more from you
    love
    WILFRED JOHN

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  • Cecil Hickman (8/27/2007 9:52:00 PM)

    Yes he has provided such awesome views for all to see and definitely he is awesome beyond compare, he has given you an awesome talent for placing words eloquently and beautiful, wonderful write my friend...Blessing...Cecil

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  • Chelsi Ruffing (8/27/2007 9:01:00 PM)

    That poem is so beautiful. I mean you really have a way with words. There truly are no words for how beautiful your poems are.

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  • Maria C. Pires CostaMaria C. Pires Costa (8/27/2007 7:23:00 PM)

    Melvina, you have been touched by 'The Lord's glorious divine hand', actually.Not only are these views awesome, so is your art of painting beautiful pictures through words of grandeur and perfection. I loved the whole atmosphere! Keep being positive. Wishing you the best,

    Maria

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  • Diane Violet (8/26/2007 12:28:00 PM)

    Ah Melvina, this is truly awesome thank you for sharing your view! ! ! All the best, Diane

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