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(563) An Awesome View

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It was a cool night with a slight drizzle in the air.
I stood at the hilltop and was in awe while standing there.
In the distance a rainbow formed, colors beautiful and bright.
I was amazed at this extraordinary awesome sight.

I see mirrors within the still waters, a half moon toward the sky.
I see shadows of large creatures gliding slowly by.
The colours are vivid with tints of periwinkle blue,
and vibrant dashes of mauve sparingly coming through.

A lip formation of moss resting upon a soft face of sand,
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Thursday, August 23, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yashim David George 12 March 2021

I love the picture it formed in my mind. Oh if I could see the eye of God in the shy half moon and look into rainbows and the mirrors of many rivers. Thank you for sharing, I saw with you.

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Akhtar Jawad 21 January 2016

It's all a game of unconscious, where our uncalled fears and unfulfilled desires are reshaped in dreams. We all see such dreams when we are not enjoying a deep sleep. A good poetess like Melvina Germain is capable enough to describe such dreams in a great poem like this. It's a wonderful poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 October 2015

The Lord has so much to share with you. i saw mirrors within the still waters. what a fine expression. your poetic vision and expressions are amazing. thank you dear Poetess

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Mj Lemon 16 October 2015

You've taken me to that place. A truly wonderful work, now among my favourites...

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Akhtar Jawad 01 August 2015

I salute to your descriptive power, I salute to the universality of messages you convey, I salute to your poetry! ...10

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Ramesh Rai 05 July 2015

Gifts of God are unique and splendorous. In my poem The Hymn of mercy I have stated Divine Charity. Beautiful poem..Love your ink. Thanks for sharing. Regards.

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Charles Garcia 07 September 2007

Melvina: Your message comes through very clearly. well done; I can attest to the validity of his pressence. Charles Garcia

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Marvin Brato 04 September 2007

'God's gift to man are these wondrous awesome views'..... sumarizes the wonderful creations of God which you have laid opened to us in full view, reminding us of His love, made us realized our inequities and our insensitivity towards our fellowmen. In this poem you also have taught us that life is worth living if we only learn to appreciate what God has done for us. Great poem Melvina! Highest Marks. You are an inspiration to us all.Thank you.

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Malgorzata Mika 03 September 2007

In your poem you managed to depict the beauty of the nature, the miracle of life that surrounds us.This was the most beautiful gift that God, the creator of humanity, could give to His creatures...And I can feel all these things in your poem :)

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Ivor Hogg 01 September 2007

The creator designed all things to be interconnected and inter dependent.But few of us are granted the ability to stand back and see Mans free will often leads him astray following success at any price.Blinkering his eyes to what he has and what is provided freely for him You must have time to stand and stare and just to BE

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