Covered in blood
I trudged along,
feet sopping wet
I’ll never forget.
kept a slow pace.
hoping for God’s grace.
I need you now,
more than ever
please help me make it
to that hospital door.
Written: August 20,2007
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
Sad and heart touching.............................10
sending-a-chill-down-the-spine read... i like the way you hv written this... compact and hardhitting... and i believe this is 'objective'...
Melvina, when I read this after being away I am hurt by this poem and I pray you are feeling better.I will call you later today and I just know you B etter have went to the doctor! (or else)
Another great sincere piece of poetry that touched my heart...something you know how to do very well...touch your readers heart.
Love ya and keep sharing.
Melvina, another sad little gem. I feel kinda helpless here knowing you are showing us a sad refrain. I sincerely hope you are all right. Thanks for sharing this my friend.
I find this very sad, like kicked in my gut sad, but, you have written a work of art never the less. ~~~~marci.xo~~~
Your on a roll today Mel, i can't even get my head around writing today...
Bloody good melvina, but oh, i hurt just reading the descriptive verse....
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
8/2/2021 8:03:50 AM # 126.96.36.1997