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(027) Jealous Love

Rating: 3.1

Jealous Love

Covered in blood
I trudged along,
feet sopping wet
I’ll never forget.
Weakened
Determined,
kept a slow pace.
Wearily

Struggling,
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Akhtar Jawad 02 August 2015

Sad and heart touching.............................10

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Asma Bahrainwala 01 September 2007

sending-a-chill-down-the-spine read... i like the way you hv written this... compact and hardhitting... and i believe this is 'objective'... Asma...

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Melvina, when I read this after being away I am hurt by this poem and I pray you are feeling better.I will call you later today and I just know you B etter have went to the doctor! (or else) Another great sincere piece of poetry that touched my heart...something you know how to do very well...touch your readers heart. Love ya and keep sharing. =Shelley=

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David Harris 27 August 2007

Melvina, another sad little gem. I feel kinda helpless here knowing you are showing us a sad refrain. I sincerely hope you are all right. Thanks for sharing this my friend. David

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Marci Made 20 August 2007

I find this very sad, like kicked in my gut sad, but, you have written a work of art never the less. ~~~~marci.xo~~~

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 20 August 2007

Your on a roll today Mel, i can't even get my head around writing today...

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Theodora Onken 20 August 2007

Bloody good melvina, but oh, i hurt just reading the descriptive verse.... Great imagination.. As always, Theo

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