Amit Biswas

Rookie - 29 Points (6th January,1960. / West Bengal, India)

999: Weak Moments - Poem by Amit Biswas

I am going through one of those weak moments,
Lonely as I have never been, I have lost just not love,
Lost a friend, I shall never get again,
Earlier I shared with you these weak moments of mine,
Today you have gone away, never to turn back again,
As I loved you and got you as a friend and everything,
I lost everybody else I had, never cared even,
That was my mistake, why should you care,
That you never wanted me the way I did, matters,
Sometimes I still feel, let me give in, and be as you want,
But soon realization strikes, that’s not love, as I had seen,
Though I know you just do that, not there alone, here too,
You want best of both worlds, at what cost, you only know,
I am devastated today, not because you went away,
But because my judgment went so wrong about your ways,
You lacked not just love but gratitude even,
I could not have afforded what you want,
Not because I did not want, but it was just not right.

Comments about 999: Weak Moments by Amit Biswas

  • (3/13/2007 12:26:00 PM)

    That must have been a lot of confusion in your mind then.... my dear.. I am sure your mind is clear and as beautiful as your compositions.... themes in life do get changed like they do in our poems.... keep writing! (Report)Reply

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  • (5/12/2006 6:27:00 AM)

    Very well put in words~


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  • (5/12/2006 5:42:00 AM)

    my heart goes out to you... i know what you feel.. how you feel.. and why you feel all that you do.. but.. inspite of it all.. love goes on.. (Report)Reply

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  • (5/12/2006 3:05:00 AM)

    A tragedy which reads gracefully. Very much from the heart. A fine piece. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 12, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, April 20, 2007

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