[ A Beast Is Pushing ] Poem by Zyw Zywa

[ A Beast Is Pushing ]

Rating: 5.0


A beast is pushing

to freedom, under my skin -


and it makes me dance.

Friday, September 11, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
"De danser" ("The dancer",1924, Martinus Nijhoff)

Collection "Passage Passion"
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 12 September 2020

" Syllabic verse- - -Poetry whose meter is determined by the total number of syllables per line, rather than the number of stresses. Marianne Moore’s poetry is mostly syllabic. Other examples include Thomas Nashe’s “Adieu, farewell earth’s bliss” and Dylan Thomas’s “Poem in October.” - - - > Aha- -your poem is a haiku, a form of syllabic verse==thank you for poetry lesson! ! ! !

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Susan Williams 12 September 2020

This is captivating! Original. Compelling. I shall look up what Syllabic Verse means so I can enjoy this piece even more. 10+++++++++++++++ onto my fav list

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