Safe In A Square Poem by Zywa Zywa

Safe In A Square

Rating: 5.0


An upper floor apartment, a square
where I am safe, not to be robbed
from anything, with internet
and a sofa bed

it is the way of life

of my friends-of:
come, don't do anything stupid
then you will be fine again
the storm will rage out

while you are in our square

Maybe I'll find a way
for myself, an area outside
where I find satisfaction
and yes, what you say

a calm inside

Friday, January 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship,safety
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
"The square" (2017, Ruben Östlund)

Asulos (Asylum)= not to rob, not to steal, immune; free from, secure against

Collection "Bruises"
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 01 December 2021

The feeling of loneliness expressed so poignantly, but with sharp positivity

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Konab Ghumman 10 March 2019

A wonderfully poem of a feeling that every one has had at some time in their lives...

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 January 2019

This poem shows the smallest part of your big generosity for mankind, your big generous heart. It starts with a spare room. Sublimest told, dear ZZ. Thank you for letting us peep in your warm inside, though for a minute. A full 10 and much much more. God's Blessings be upon you and your beloved family, Zywa.

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Zywa Zywa 12 January 2019

Dear Sylvia, I am glad with your understanding. Each house should have a spare bedroom.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 January 2019

A fine pretty poem, Zywa....................

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Zywa Zywa 11 January 2019

You are welcome, Bernard. I wish everyone will have a house with a spare bedroom. Because once or twice in life there will be a friend in need.

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