Thursday, June 9, 2016

A Beautiful Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's not a cloud today
Just a sky of blue
As the sun shines bright
It feels so new
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Zohaad Irfan
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Kelly Kurt 09 June 2016

Your poem made the day even more beautiful. Thanks, Zohaad

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Nosheen Irfan 09 June 2016

Wowww...this is truly a beautiful day when you wish that time would stand still. A lovely read. So refreshing n heart-warming. Thanks for sharing.

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..let the time stand still for a little while.Amazing write.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 June 2016

It looks like everyone came to town! Nice work.

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Akhtar Jawad 09 June 2016

So it was the hot beauty of someone that beautiful clouds couldn't stand before and left all on the hot bright sun. But the sun too stood still giving sometime to the poet to describe the incident, just until!

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