Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)
South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
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A Better Lover

Rating: 4.8
We All Want To Be Man,
But I Want To Be A Better Man
We All Want To Be Husbands,
But I Want To Be A Better Husband

We All Want To Be Fathers,
But I Want To Be A Better Father
We All Want To Be Sons,
I Have Always Wanted To Be A Better Son
We All Want To Be Leaders
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COMMENTS
Vivek Tiwari 06 December 2012
Better is really better therefore be good and ever positive.
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Emmanuel Odei Oduro 06 December 2012
simple straight forward but hits the nail right on the head. Good poem, strong message
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Prateep Sengupta 05 June 2012
Nice poem with an honesty and simplicity reflected through each line. Keep writing
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O! realy? Dats jst some wonderful stuff truely written with much honesty. You just do not disappoint Anele. Do u? You one of the most active young lad I've came across
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Kameron K 23 May 2012
VERY GOOD! I loved this one!
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Its indeed good fdull of UN-expectations...and you've carried me thro' Specially 'But Still Want To Be A Better Loser, ' thats the spirit if we get everything best life becomes stale insipid I thank you for a poem with fodder for thought...tenner ~ Regards ~ niv Thanks for comment on my poem I Want To Be Raped Invite to read and comment on my sequel poem [read as a protest] ‘Ogling Orgy’ or any … Thanks …..Sorry for belated comment
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Indeed, I also wana be a better father to my kids and a better lover to my sweetheart! ! awesome my friend... Siya_! !
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