Ramesh T A

Gold Star - 48,665 Points (28th August 1950 / Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India)

A Big Golden Moon! - Poem by Ramesh T A

2010 Moon is revolving round the Earth bright in closer orbit
Making Solar eclipse look like ring fire and not diamond ring!
Often golden Moon rise lasts longer before it becomes silver
In the evenings bigger in size than usual on Full Moon days!
Big golden Moon shines bright yellow long in the winter
With the Sky clear having no clouds indicating last phase;
But heavy chill wind blows cold making all shiver despite
They walk brisk sans slackening the pace a little to the end!

Becoming Sun like silver light, Moon attains brilliant beauty
Changing Sea into Milky Way of Universe similar to Vaikunda,
The abode of Lord Vishnu, God of protection of the good people
And His consort Goddess Lakshmi giver of wealth to mankind!

Big golden Moon becoming silver Moon inspires hope and joy
Confirming confidence to all to survive, sustain and succeed ever!


Comments about A Big Golden Moon! by Ramesh T A

  • (2/4/2010 2:05:00 AM)


    Ramesh,
    This is indeed a beautiful poem! Rich imagery and allegorical meaning....Big golden Moon becoming silver Moon....lovely!

    Thanx for sharing.
    Bless. Leonard
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  • (2/4/2010 2:05:00 AM)


    Ramesh,
    This is indeed a beautiful poem! Rich imagery and allegorical meaning....Big golden Moon becoming silver Moon....lovely!

    Thanx for sharing.
    Bless. Leonard
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 4, 2010



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