A Blood Relation Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Blood Relation

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They argue it as syndrome of blood relation
Is it matter of convenience or though elevation?
It is not difficult to understand in simple context
We let it pass of ignorantly as mere pretext

There is definite push and pull mechanism
It is equally good to have bond in humanism
It least somewhere we show some kind of attachment
There is long list of hierachy and goes on as movement

There is restriction at each and every level
It goes on and to develop and exceedingly marvel
How loosely we remain to be connected in sphere
It is always peaceful, harmonious and I healthy atmosphere

How parents rear their children in responsible manner
They may grow in full adulthood later or sooner
There is complete love in the eyes of every member
Proper care is taken in all the aspects and closely remembered

Time and tide change with the advent or passage
The strong bond or relation remains only message
Everybody loves to remain under one shield
Family as such remains one identity and only field

Children unduly demand and expect something more
They often enter into clash and go for the possibilities to explore
Sometimes it turns into battle field and unruly scene is created
Relation turn sour and all the niceties is cremated

Brother to brother act as sworn enemy
The relation goes on vane simply for money
Parents watch helplessly and condemn the move
They often curse the luck but unable to prove

The entire relation hangs on bare thread
No one bothers to understand or read
Elders try for patch and plead
Elders go in different direction and try to lead

It is happening everywhere and no one is exception
There is different dimension in relation since inception
No one can claim free from any diversion or friction
Still family bond remains as complete addiction


Had there been complete transparency in relation?
It should have excelled in all the direction
Of late it has developed visible cracks
The complete theory is thrown out of tracks

The joint families are breaking and new concept takes over
They try to limit their goals and don’t try to recover
We remain only on name remain in blood relation
There is always mistrust and does not sound well with indication

Even close acquiesce turn into blood thirsty
We can lament only and feel pity
Though it remains still as strong bond with attachment
All get united when it is felt for a moment

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abnish Singh Chauahan 18 May 2010

a beautiful presentation of blood relation and social life, setting it in modern context.

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Commendable work...Intriguing storyline...valuable message...FjR

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Gul naz 26 May 2010

'The entire relation hangs on bare thread No one bothers to understand or read Elders try for patch and plead Elders go in different direction and try to lead' A poem with a very moral message

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Ramesh Adwant 29 May 2010

still family bond remains a complete addiction.....This addiction is the root cause of all problems. We can't give up and we can't stay together. This is the great Indian dilemma.Burying the hatchet and coming together forgetting all the differences is the only answer. A good insightful poem.

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Chand Shikari 11 July 2010

It is not difficult to understand in simple context We let it pass of ignorantly as mere pretext... it is our ignorance that comes on the way.10 read mine... how r u

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Bella Stylos 28 January 2012

We are human! all moving too well will turn us into perfect! I like the choice of words

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Whisperkwane Lamb 18 October 2011

family today in this world of technology we need order a place of patience and understanding...you said 'There is definite push and pull mechanism It is equally good to have bond in humanism It least somewhere we show some kind of attachment' In-laws, are sometimes better then blood relation...you have open many path of the mind and heart....very good write...we need to know what we need to help us...as blood relation's...thank you for helping me out...eye's open as well as my mind..thanks

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Tanveer Alam 25 July 2011

ooo well... you have expalined very nicely about what happens and even happening in the families in your poem... and its true.... Its really nice-1.

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Pramiti Upadhyay 16 September 2010

Ver nice poem........I really love it's uniqueness

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Darshna Chopra 01 September 2010

There is definite push and pull mechanism It is equally good to have bond in humanism

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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