Two worlds, cruel fate, two worlds apart.
Don't cry my dear, when it gets dark
We'll build a bridge across the stars
To mountains, moons and golden hearts.
floyd your poem was beautiful. you were able to capture so much in so little words. i hope when you are finshed your bridge it leads you to your golden heart. i am sure it is waiting for you. Jen
an optimistic bridge! see it through to the bitter end. keep bulding! never say die! you would reach it!
beautiful little write :) ....taken to the heart.....profound and lovely..... 10++: D
I like it very much. Beautiful and clever text. (10v.) Greetings.Maria Barbara Korynt
a bridge through the stars! ! ! wonderful expression and a stunning poem....keep writing please!
nice surrealistic poem, thank you for sharing................10
you do have a way with words, i do have to admit though, i didn't really understand this one, you sould explain it sometime. all the same, good job
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very nicely written about death..I gave you a ten..