A cat perched on the Railing –
To enamor my every moment –
Was all it took – to make my way –
Out of Jumping's 'jailing.'
A distant singer on the stage –
To swoon me immortally –
Was all it took – to make my day –
And end my enemy – Rage.
Rage – in his grave –
Lets Jumping flee – and go sailing.
This departure I owe – to the singer – so brave –
And my cat perched on the Railing.
A marvelous majestic poem! Very powerfully written with true honest emotion.Yuh's fantastic.Thank you
The poem is beautiful, the flow is magnificent and the message is clear. Just an overall great poem by a great poetess. Good job.
I love how the theme circles around and gets so concisely summarized in the last several lines. You have such a nice style. The words you choose and the way you organize them ~ very smooth!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
A truly gripping poem. I'm officially a fan of yours now.