It started out as a repressed passion
All it took was some hotel action
That day there was much to be done
The day I didn't know of things to come
I was falling
Falling deep in love
He was soon the one I thought most of
I wanted two to become one
With him I always had so much fun
I truly loved him more I think
That I can type with paper and ink
Until the day that everything
All my fantasies faded away
I found out that the one I wanted as a lover
Only wanted to love another
What a sad little poem. You really must read mine - The Bloom of Youth - Adeline
you gave a sad turn to the poem in the end.is it true? very nice write.loved it.
A wonderful piece. Very nicely done. :)
Falling deep in love! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Most good love poems start funny and end up fantastic.......like yours! tfs
Love is like a rose..Beautiful in the night...Beautiful in the dawn...Whether expressed or unexpressed... It remains within you till the moment you suppress it.. But it dissolves into the whole when you express it... Thanks for sharing your lovely poem....your lovely lines...I wonder if this is one of your autobiographical poems..
An all too fammiliar experience for many. Countless hearts broken in the same way. Very sad and painful story.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Oh what a sad twist at the end. You expressed so concisely what I imagine occurs (unfortunately) for too often in real life. Very good poem!