A part of you just wants to be free
You know it to be the same with me
A part of me Knows this cannot be
But it's the pain that makes this hard to see
A part of you wants to see this through
Could you be the one I can turn to?
A part of me know this love to be true
Will you pay the cost of what you do?
A part of you wants to put up the fight
To say screw them all and everything in sight
A part of me knows you would be right
Could I follow a new path? I just might
A part of you will sing a sad song
Where does a love like this truely belong?
A part of me knows you are gone
And with out you I can still be strong
Because our love once set us free
I now lay here with a part of you in me.
Couldn’t understand, how could that be? It’s as clear as glass and well written. Great job, Adeline
This is a great, great writing. The problem I had is the problem I usually have with something like this. It just isn't 'crystal clear'. Because of that, I gave it a nine. In terms of quality writing though, it is a ten all the way. GW62
Very profound. A part of all of us asks these same questions. And do we ever really know the answers? I think it all comes down to a giant leap of faith. Well written - deeply introspective. Linda
Very powerful poem. I think this piece is well written. I think this is a good poem to convey feelings of sacrifice..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A saddened ending though the poem is ingrained with deep and heartfelt emotions that somehow show your emptiness...... But one has to move on in life...... Best Wishes Sameer