A part of you just wants to be free
You know it to be the same with me
A part of me Knows this cannot be
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Couldn’t understand, how could that be? It’s as clear as glass and well written. Great job, Adeline
This is a great, great writing. The problem I had is the problem I usually have with something like this. It just isn't 'crystal clear'. Because of that, I gave it a nine. In terms of quality writing though, it is a ten all the way. GW62
Very profound. A part of all of us asks these same questions. And do we ever really know the answers? I think it all comes down to a giant leap of faith. Well written - deeply introspective. Linda
Very powerful poem. I think this piece is well written. I think this is a good poem to convey feelings of sacrifice..
A saddened ending though the poem is ingrained with deep and heartfelt emotions that somehow show your emptiness...... But one has to move on in life...... Best Wishes Sameer