A Cloud Called Peace Poem by Chuy Amante

A Cloud Called Peace

Rating: 5.0


Sitting in a cloud called peace
I left all else with sweet release

Just looking down
on all created
what man maintains,
God abated

Where is the kind,
caring, validating
compassion?

Mostly I see hate, ego,
and soulless bashin'

Here I'll rest,
enjoy my stay
I love manKind,
there's a better way

Monday, July 21, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: peace
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 22 July 2014

You see, What we all should see, And condemn, For there seems to be no end, To man's depravity. Thanks for presenting it, So Poetically. 10/10

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