ritty patnaik

Rookie - 41 Points (6th july 1952 / cuttack)

A Cluster Of Lily Of The Valley - Poem by ritty patnaik

playing hide and seek
in the mellowing sunny breeze,
hidden in the stream side,
the leaves a deep green hue..

bashfull and pretty,
shyly hidden in the leaflets,
a cluster of scented fragrance,
swaying in the breeze,

growing together,
a field of whiteness
bells hanging down,
almost like being ashamed

so pretty when i spied her,
my love, lily of the valley.


Comments about A Cluster Of Lily Of The Valley by ritty patnaik

  • (5/15/2010 4:15:00 AM)


    this is sweet little poem.. abt lily really beautiful.... (Report) Reply

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  • (2/9/2010 6:47:00 AM)


    Ritty, you made a lovely picture in my mind, it also reminded me of where I came from, childhood memories of soft clusters of bells. Bob (Report) Reply

  • Prashant Shaurya (2/7/2010 3:09:00 AM)


    this is something i like you for right from the time when i first read you, madam..
    and you are one of the finest imagery creators and you bring out the beauty so very well..
    i have become a fan..
    and madam tell me how to do it like you..
    regards
    prashant
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  • (2/2/2010 5:01:00 AM)


    Is it simply beautiful? ? ? I am arrested by the majesty of thoughts! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 30, 2010



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