A Consummate Love Poem by Fay Slimm

A Consummate Love

Rating: 5.0


A rare fullness describes best
The love which releases utter
Fulfillment, - love which gives rest.
Searching for wholeness, we can trust
That fate will arrange, entire
And complete, a right love, by
Guiding our heart, and firing
Us fully for unqualified
Giving, achieving this truth
Will consummate total love,
Which when brimful, conclusive
Yet rounded, is easy to prove.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shashendra Amalshan 19 May 2009

so beautiful..love seems to flow thru yur veins...infact thru yur pen too...your pen seems to ooze out ink of love..soo very beautiful..10++

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 16 May 2009

Tis a way with words you have my friend, beautiful again and again...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 15 May 2009

Beautiful moving poem,10++

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Shashendra Amalshan 11 May 2009

Love is da most beautiful feeling ever...jesus's best weapon against devil..harry pottter's best weapon, superpower against evil...n wolverine's best weapon too..love is his best super power...cause if devil toook over he cud v become a tiger, , , see u soon wirth love10+++

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Fiona Davidson 05 May 2009

Beautiful write Fay...so flowing....and Lisa is quite right in her comment...Fi 10+++

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