Fay Slimm

Rookie - 102 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

A Consummate Love - Poem by Fay Slimm

A rare fullness describes best
The love which releases utter
Fulfillment, - love which gives rest.
Searching for wholeness, we can trust
That fate will arrange, entire
And complete, a right love, by
Guiding our heart, and firing
Us fully for unqualified
Giving, achieving this truth
Will consummate total love,
Which when brimful, conclusive
Yet rounded, is easy to prove.

Comments about A Consummate Love by Fay Slimm

  • (5/19/2009 2:56:00 PM)

    so beautiful..love seems to flow thru yur veins...infact thru yur pen too...your pen seems to ooze out ink of love..soo very beautiful..10++ (Report) Reply

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  • (5/16/2009 1:32:00 PM)

    Tis a way with words you have my friend, beautiful again and again...10 (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (5/15/2009 1:39:00 AM)

    Beautiful moving poem,10++ (Report) Reply

  • (5/11/2009 12:39:00 AM)

    Love is da most beautiful feeling ever...jesus's best weapon against devil..harry pottter's best weapon, superpower against evil...n wolverine's best weapon too..love is his best super power...cause if devil toook over he cud v become a tiger, , , see u soon wirth love10+++ (Report) Reply

  • (5/5/2009 4:49:00 AM)

    Beautiful write Fay...so flowing....and Lisa is quite right in her comment...Fi 10+++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 5, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 20, 2009

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