A Crazy Intruder Poem by Amitava Sur

A Crazy Intruder

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A heart doesn't know
When that mind will fall in love with someone else.
What that poor heart even can do
Whenever that mind starts loving another?
This crooked love is so unpredictable
And crazy it is
That it's neither in my control nor in yours.
When this love flows on and on
One behaves like a naughty breeze
And the other one must be like a current in high tide.
It's like those wild waves in sea or an unruly stallion,
Listening to none on this earth.

Crazy crazy and so crazy is this love
That it's grammar still remains as a mystery only,
Unknown and with no control! !
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Amitava.(1.2.2017)

A Crazy Intruder
Wednesday, February 1, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 03 February 2017

Wow! Sensational poem! Exciting, love that naughty breeze imagery! A great poem, I love it! Light hearted and tender also, it elicits different feelings within me. Please let me have some more of that poetical mind of yours in poetry, it is so vibrant, please come and write much more, you are missed dear Amitava here on ph. Thank you for sharing this one. RoseAnn

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