A Cruel Joke Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Cruel Joke

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It is simple and cruel joke
We unnecessarily poke
Create thick clouds with smoke
Keep eyes closed even if awoke

We believe in creating difference
Draw wrong conclusions and inference
We need cross check and nice reference
It is proving artificial with no fragrance

Why not has one reference from each religion?
Will it not benefit any specific region?
The war clouds may try to disintegrate
No more misery and pain to state

One good word from each of the holy book
Gather it in one close tin and cook
What will the real stuff with fragrance?
It may please all at first glance

Time has come to unite under one roof
What else we need as live proof?
Neck to neck competition in all the fields
Destruction all over only to get reward and shields

You may need no long range missiles
It will wear happiness and good smiles
Where will we need to aim and fire at?
What will be our goal to fix and set?

All the lands to be blessed with no tension
No displacement and torture to mention
No frontier guards and measures for prevention
This prove as unique in proposition as good invention

It is theoretically impracticable
No one can proceed with it or find unable
Still it is worth giving a trial
If no good response then there won’t be any denial too

The world needs peace and respite
It has attained nothing despite
Good efforts for peaceful mission
With frank and open admission


It is high time to find solution
There has to be some firm resolution
Nothing may work out well for power devolution
It may witness again bloody revolution

Do we want to witness ghettos and dungeons?
Going back to primitive sate and use the pigeons
What have learnt from Holy Spirit and religions?
Why not we bid good bye to different opinions?

It may not favor with fanatics
It may not appeal to lunatics
They have their own statistics
They believe in playing with carrot and sticks

Human race may be lost at the end
How can we call our self as best friend?
Where is the nice feeling for fellow brethrens?
It is adding woes and many concerns

Let the proposal gather the dust
The sincere and honest try is must
it may remain as paper theory or thought
World can be won over even without battles being fought

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hope Anonymous 08 July 2010

Excellent poem. 'World can be won over even without battles being fought' so true

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Darshna Chopra 06 August 2010

It is simple and cruel joke We unnecessarily poke Create thick clouds with smoke Keep eyes closed even if awoke if we really poke and unnecesarily fiddle...10

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Okan Emanet 01 August 2010

A real masterpiece in terms of the design of the rhymes...

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The world needs peace and respite It has attained nothing despite Good efforts for peaceful mission With frank and open admission....yes peace n respite....10

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Gul naz 09 July 2010

You are very true we are making missiles and bombs to destruct ourselves but we do not think about it unless those missiles and bombs are directly targeted on us otherwise we are silent. It is a sad and miserable situation and we must do something or else there will be no world.

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Malaya Roses 08 July 2010

Paper talking but who can walk the talk? Only people with honor, sincerity and love shall divert our wrong path of material world to the right way of humble living. You are very real in this poem cause in this world, power, money and status-quo will speaks therefore everybody running after it and become more selfish.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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