Saturday, September 30, 2006

A Broken Heart

Rating: 4.8
Many parts to my broken heart,
from the day when it fell apart.
My whole world came crashing down,
but its fell with out a sound.

All the love that you stole,
left me standing in a hole,
from the day my world fell apart,
I'm standing here with a broken heart.

A second that passes feels like an hour,
all my emotions have turned sour,
feeling all hollow and left alone,
my heart has turned to solid stone.

A broken heart was the death of me,
its now so simple to see,
isnt it better to atleast fall,
than to never of loved at all?
Kev Elmer
Well written... Another painful experience I guess...
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Claire Jones 26 February 2007
Another beautifully expressed poem! CJ.xx.
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Kelly Allen Vinal 01 October 2006
Most excellent structure and wonderful presentation, even if it is a sad topic!
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