A Dab Of Cheese Poem by Angelina Pandian

A Dab Of Cheese

Rating: 3.1


No Monitor
No keyboard
No time to sit….
To think… to write…
Away on holiday
Cut off from life
From my love
My poemhunter…
I sit alone
Looking out
At the moon
Changeless…
Changing…
Every night…
A new view…
Surrounded
By band of rainbow hues
Hidden one night
Behind gossamer clouds
Like a pumpkin
So near… I think
I can touch…
Another night
So far…. so small
Like a pale tilak*
Run down with
The heat of sun
On the face of sky, , ,
I sit alone
Out of touch
With the world
I bemoan
But, your messages
They blink upon
My cellphone screen
And brighten up
My sky like the moon
Luminous, diffused light
Chasing away my gloom
A dab of cheese
On the cheek of a cloud!

Tilak - A mark on the forehead of married women with Sindoor or Kumkum, Veer Tilak is a mark made on the forehead of soldiers going out to war!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Hitesh Sheth 18 June 2009

A good poem capturing a beauty of the nature.................................................a good write...........

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Jay P. Narain 15 June 2009

Rule for a nice vacation. No computers, no TV, no cell phone. May be the cell phone is precious than gold these days, it can be allowed. I love your observations on moon, clouds and whole nature. Even in this great solitude, when someone touches your heart, the whole nature shines.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 15 June 2009

But, your messages They blink upon My cellphone screen And brighten up My sky like the moon Luminous, diffused light Chasing away my gloom A dab of cheese On the cheek of a cloud! Lovely and unique images. Beautiful poem, Angelina. Best Wishes Naseer

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premji premji 13 June 2009

solitude..... soul lit of doing nothing...............

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Surya . 13 June 2009

and you thoughts brighten me up, your call electrify me. very nice poem. voted 10 surya

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