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A Danger Way - Poem by SALINI NAIR

Its so fanatic all the way
But now it comes as a lazy way
It hits somewhere, but not at right
Its rigid not so splendid
But the success is there at a glance
But the target is set elsewhere and hidden
Need to survive to be kinetic
It will lead to sheer point
A long way of tasks and pits
But to reach the height, need to be alert
Will win; may be the next

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Topic(s) of this poem: life

Comments about A Danger Way by SALINI NAIR

  • (9/8/2014 12:40:00 PM)

    Yes to be successful one needs to be resolutely persistent and steadfast...........very well composed (Report) Reply

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  • (4/13/2014 8:17:00 AM)

    success should be the ultimate aim.............. (Report) Reply

  • Vishal Sharma (2/3/2014 12:44:00 AM)

    Great poem....! !

    Loved your wording heartly...! !
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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 3, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 23, 2014

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