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Mother ……….. - Poem by SALINI NAIR

First feel not in reminiscence
But can feel aloud
It was there to hold all
Mother the phenomenon
Wrap that never bust
Wrestle to protect
But bang to restrict
Yet never revolt for freedom
March for all; but never asked to pay
Contract the wish yet conquer the world
Enormous form in the world
Mother the feel, the proud behind
First love that never ravage
Eternal vision that send to world
Landed before to carry the guest
Fold with love and care
Say good bye after the mission
Eternal phenomenon that continues…………

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Topic(s) of this poem: mother

Comments about Mother ……….. by SALINI NAIR

  • (10/17/2017 8:46:00 AM)

    A great poem..! I loved it.. thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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  • (9/3/2016 10:13:00 PM)

    Hi Salini,
    A totally different take on the phenomenon of motherhood.

    First feel not in reminiscence
    But can feel aloud
    It was there to hold all
    Mother the phenomenon
    Mother is the
    Wrap never bust
    Who Wrestles to protect
    But bang to restrict,
    but the child
    never revolts for freedom
    And she never asks to pay' back for all the love and care she has rendered to her child.

    Yes, Mother is the feel that makes everyone proud and his/her First love.

    She does does not stay back to say good bye after the mission, but wishes to simply fade away.
    An Eternal phenomenon that continues…………

    Beautifully penned. Manifest of all the love and care enjoyed by the poet from her mother and may be, all the affection she has for her mother. Loved reading.
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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (9/23/2015 5:31:00 AM)

    Mother, the eternal phenomenon that continues... a very fine ending for such a beautiful poem. love of the mother, and love for the mother. very nice poem thank you (Report) Reply

  • Sranisha Francis (9/20/2015 5:19:00 PM)

    These words are very beautiful.

    First love that never ravage
    Eternal vision that send to world
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/31/2014 10:05:00 AM)

    A great tribute and great write on phenomenal mother.....Salini.....amazing write......Wish you a happy and prosperous new year 2015! (Report) Reply

  • (12/14/2014 1:52:00 AM)

    A woman is great because she is a mother and your beautiful poem is great as it is written on a mother..........10 (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (12/12/2014 7:02:00 PM)

    a lovely poem about mother the most wonderful person on earth nice work (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (10/23/2014 6:41:00 AM)

    A mother is an unexplainable phenomenon and her love is irreplaceable! She is the very embodiment of love and care! A great tribute to a mother! (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (8/4/2014 12:03:00 AM)

    Mother is a topic on which the entire humanity is one. A great poem. (Report) Reply

  • (6/12/2014 9:05:00 AM)

    In this world of sorrow and other difficulties it is the mother who always comes to our rescue through her love and affection without selfishness and there is no comparison to that divine word as mother. The poet have written a good poem with highly thoughtful words and it became a wonderful creation and poem. I interested the poem. (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2014 3:24:00 AM)

    mother the truth....her visual.............. (Report) Reply

  • Yash Shinde (4/10/2014 10:32:00 PM)

    .filled with affection and love for a woman who brings you into this world in nurtures you, throughout her life.........
    She cannot be thanked by a rhyme of few words, yet this beautiful tribute of yours, will bring tears of joy to her eyes.........
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  • Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair (4/9/2014 11:24:00 AM)

    A heart that is always warm
    To son or daughter at any age
    A mother once, a mother forever
    Her love and compassion never fades...............

    Very good poem. I also welcome you to my page
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  • Gajanan Mishra (4/7/2014 5:41:00 AM)

    fold with love and care, I like it, thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 7, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 23, 2014

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