A Day At The Beach Comments
As I walk along the beach, the waves crashing near,
The sound of thunder through my ear;
The soft crystal sand slides through my feet,
The fearing of love kind of like a treat;
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You have the makings of a good poet. Keep up the good work and write some more
Great work Joshua, I am with Pradip.You will be an excellent story teller in future years.
A sweet poem for a beginner like you Joshua. You have done well. You can create still better if you spend sometime during your vacation at a sea beach to experience it yourself.
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3/17/2026 2:46:05 AM # 1.0.0
This is a cool poem, it sounds realistic and i can feel the joy as well as excitement you inserted between the words here..keep it up! way to go_Soul