this is the day i think were goin steady
i sure hope i am ready
sitting in my bedroom white dress and vale
soon ill be goin down that rail
flowers in my hand
out of the veihcle and on the ground i land
in front of the church i am
tears out my eyes all ram
of happiness they come
im excited some
i walk up those stairs
this man really cares
down the aisle
with a great big smile
the man of my dreams
this walk so long it seems
up on the steps i go
thay werent that low
my man saying his vows
the audience have wows
i then say my vows too
and everything id do
then you say i do
and i say i do too
then you lean me over and kiss me
now together we have a world to see
this was a day i won't forget
and the man i wont regret
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
looks pretty good to me........the theme's good..........i guess sunshine is being too harsh........... i will advice you to check the spellings though..........coz u have quite a few spelling mistakes........and one more and important thing, i think you are forcing your poem to rhyme.....i will give you an example........ ''of happiness they come im excited some''' here some looks all out of place and seems like u have forced it so as to rhyme with come.........remember poetry is not about rhyme always......... All in all a good poem.............. ;)