A Desperate Plea To Dagenham Poem by Not Long Left

A Desperate Plea To Dagenham

Rating: 5.0


It is on these streets,
that I weep,
inside myself.
Selfish as it is, I do not belong here,
Like a parcel wrongly delivered.

Dagenham you rot within yourself,
your people pulling you down,
like cancer they find and destoy.
Streets littered with discarded dreams,
mingling with hell - inviting couloured cans.
As futures fall through unsteady hands.

Baby face girls with straightened curls,
push pale faced babies in fake designer prams.
There is no one to talk to in pubs,
Alien talk hovers above my head,
as I fade into my ciggarette shield.

Mean faced men sheared of all hair,
Sit with legs shaking under the chair,
Like a Volcano waiting to explode.
heated from within there ignorant minds.

What rots, and stagnants sucks me in,
slowly my speach has changed.
Twenty four years of careful flawed guidance,
Has placed me here, a house of violence.

Dagenham I am not one of your
whores so let me escape and move on,
I am sinking in your shit,
And I am forgetting where I am from.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

You paint it superbly (not that I know the place) . How many of us feel such, about so many places.... Wonderfully, personally put in a way in which so many of us can relate to. (Perhaps it is true that familiarity breeds contempt?) More! -though not just about Dagenham! ! ! ....

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Gina Onyemaechi 04 February 2006

Simple, Vince: put your poems together, take them to Faber & Faber, watch the profits roll in, then get the f**k out of Dagenham! ! ! There. Simple. Warm regards, Gina.

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Michael Shepherd 04 February 2006

Heartbreaking. The first generation, moved out of the rotting East End, were so proud of their newly-built homes...

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