Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 465,829 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

A Dream Only - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Dream within dream
The palace on sold structure of beam
Well founded and standing erect
Noble ideas in dream also to act

You dream nicely to fulfill the task
You feel shy and do not venture to ask
Anybody as to what you think about mission
What is your fault in making the admission?

It is perfect platform where you are judge and jury
You can free the prisoner or cause the injury
You have ample time and not in hurry
How much burden you intend to carry?

It reflects well in chains when you are at rest
You plead and seek the answer to the level best
It is not for your weakness or endurance test
You feel very much safe as if in the nest

You do not shy away from the crowd
You speak with great volumes and very loud
It heard with great care and attention
You are not running out of passion

You have suffered terrible absence
It has ruined you without her presence
You were not able to convince loyalty
You followed it with care and honesty

Your ultimate goal was not realized
She was surrounded by many and obliged
You had no means to reach her and plead
She was unable to grasp you and read

It is the case with many more
They fail to convince and explore
They hold in high esteem and adore
Still so much failure in store

It was lack of confidence and boldness
It was something short of frankness too
The love required dashing approach
You were needing help from the coach

Certain fields are above the preview
It needs close affinity and view
If one can see it minutely and observe
It can be made out easily for those who deserve

Entire gamut of exercise opens up in dream
They flow easily in the main stream
The ship carries only two of them
They are the main characters and only gems

All promises are taken and given
Simple mistakes are easily forgiven
Under the open sky and vast horizons
No feeling of religion or special zones

Words are easily found to express
Peace and happiness without any duress
Open and frank discussion for future plan
Cal surface on pond and easy swim for swan

Had there been no dreams at all?
There would have been suicides and fall
No one could have got any solution
Even with firm action and resolution

Comments about A Dream Only by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Unwritten Soul (11/21/2010 11:31:00 PM)

    Beautiful seed of thought...may it sprout a fresh dream stalk and fruit the reality through pollination of chances...thanks for sharing Hasmukh keep smile on your face, like this :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 21, 2010

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