A Drop Of Pleasure Poem by Lorena Lalen Cruz

A Drop Of Pleasure



Young love arise, left and right
Though cloudy, yes obscure
Everyone thirst just for a drop
A dropp of one man's pleasure

Yes, for a pleasurable drop
Not for always and forever
Not for love's eternality
Nor for love's strength moulder

For young love only seeks
For a face of higher popularity
A face of a higher ego
And a face of higher maturity

These dawns the murkiness
Of young heart's ability
To seek for a dusky revenge
Or to open the gate of positivity

Yes, love is convoluted
But young love is worse
For innocence gyrates around them
Which makes love a lot like a curse

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nashy Lamen 06 August 2009

I agree with julia.. but it is true.. Its still weak and not properly molded yet... nice poem to ponder on.. c:

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Julia Pascual 06 August 2009

you're really not into young love.. obviously.. LOL... but you really dignified your point here.. nice poem..

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