A Drunk's Last Request (Limerick) Poem by Spock the Vegan

A Drunk's Last Request (Limerick)

Rating: 4.3


Two Drunks were sitting at the bar
They were drinking - that's the way they are
While they were drinking
One said 'I was thinking,
If I die tonight, please gas up my car.'

A Drunk's Last Request (Limerick)
Saturday, January 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: drunk,drunkenness,alcohol,alcoholism,drinking,drugs,drunkard,thinking ,request
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Alcohol and drugs impair your thinking process temporarily and also permanently.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rosie Bourget 06 January 2016

Awesome! Good things come from small package.

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Spock The Vegan 30 September 2016

Thanks a lot, Rosie!

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Wes Vogler 05 January 2016

Two drunks as they sat at the bar (works)

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Wes Vogler 05 January 2016

First two lines too many words and last line drop the please. (you asked)

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Spock The Vegan 30 September 2016

Sorry I did. Without please he would be rude.

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Kim Barney 03 January 2016

Even with gas in his car He's not likely to go far.

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Kelly Kurt 02 January 2016

That explains a lot. I thought I was just stupid.: -)

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Spock The Vegan 30 September 2016

With enough drinking you could be.: -)

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