A Fall Evening Poem by anais vionet

A Fall Evening

Rating: 5.0


Stars spark from a deeping, clear, blue winter sky as
the moon prepares to enter the scene, stage left.

A breeze sweeps away the last blushes of sunlight and
evening caroling-bells, ring like wind-chimes.

The evening chill makes students walking back from
classes seem to walk a little closer for warmth.

Students, huddled to nail down evening plans seem to smoke,
like the exhaust of cars exiting campus in bumper to bumper traffic.

Wet sidewalks, like dark and winding mirrors, twist reality, inverting and reflecting lights - bending them into pointing the way home.

Friday, December 10, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: december,fall,evening,college,teen
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
a fall evening after class
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 10 December 2021

Very good imagery I felt I was there too. A good 5*

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