A Family As A Whole Poem by Kylee Bartz

A Family As A Whole

Rating: 5.0


We are one family.
One nation, one world.
But why do we fight?
Why must we fight?

Why is our world engulfed in hatred?
Why do we not have peace?
We are weak. Ignorant.
Blind.

We do not love.
Not like we should.
Where is that peace? That love?

We are one.
It’s time we acted like it.
Together, we are strong.

Feel the peace. Feel the love.
It is there. Find it.
It is small, tiny, nearly invisible.
But it is there, if we look hard enough.

If we find it,
We must nurture it.
Let us take that peace, that love.
And multiply it, by infinity.

So the world,
Our home,
Our family
Can be a better place.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 29 May 2010

a lovely global family concept and a sweet way expressed in poetic way..like the way you wrote..well done, ,10/10++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Lefix Onyango 02 June 2010

i love your work, out of 10, i would give you 11 for the work wee done

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Elias Barcelona 03 June 2010

A great way to look at the world and very well written keep em comin

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Alex Robert 01 November 2010

you are an amazing writer...you can think so deep

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River..you are an amazing writer...you can think so deep..n that too at such an age...you are a true writer..God bless u...wish i could think as deep as u....

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Manolo Del Toro 08 June 2010

Kid you are great. heck I barely started talking at thirteen. You are a real poet, better than aldo kraas. Well I don't know if I gave you a compliment or insulted you.

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Claude H Oliver Ii 04 June 2010

Beautiful insight for one so young.

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Iron Panda 23™ 03 June 2010

truenesss.....beautifullll......likes this alot^-^

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Kylee Bartz

Kylee Bartz

Attica, New York
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