Ramesh T A

Gold Star - 47,332 Points (28th August 1950 / Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India)

A Free Bird! - Poem by Ramesh T A

Green parrots live as a family in a palace garden here;
Free bird life is what they really enjoy we all dream!
Boisterous dialogues they have each other on flight;
Morning, afternoon, evening we can hear their voice!

Plantain fruit, mango and guava fruit trees are around here;
They enjoy feasting all kinds of fruits and chillies too!
Everything is green around them reflecting their colour,
Which is a great wonder for all to look at and envy ever!

Crows, mynahs are there but they are nothing before parrots,
Who are the ruling monarchs commanding in the air ever
Like mischievous children playing with full of noise always
Indicating their full fledged freedom and joy no one can get!

What a life these green parrots enjoy and live forever and ever,
Which could be the great dream of my next birth if there is here!


Comments about A Free Bird! by Ramesh T A

  • Ramesh T A (12/14/2009 7:00:00 AM)


    Thanks Ian for your double comments due to PH server problem! For a long time PH server is not properly functioning. It is proved beyond doubt now! It is due to this PH server mischief ranks of best poets are not at the correct places in Top 500 Poets too! Thanks once again for your great effort to send this beautiful comment on my new poem! (Report) Reply

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  • (12/14/2009 2:22:00 AM)


    Ramesh, have placed different comments on your poem...all of which have been deleted by some new glitch to the system. This is a fine piece of work, and I hope your wish for the next life comes to be.
    Regards,
    Ian
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  • (12/14/2009 2:15:00 AM)


    Ramesh, enjoyed this one. You show the reader a wonderful picture of things that surround you.
    Hope your wish for your next birth comes true. Your joy of this life shines through.
    Regards,
    Ian
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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 14, 2009



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