Friday, March 21, 2008

A Good Day Is To Come For Everyone Comments

Rating: 3.5

I used to think all was not.
Which then lead to deeper thoughts.
Too many tears were then shed.
And I thought that, well, tomorrow I would be dead.
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I Am Who I Am
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Ibukun Bright 11 October 2011

splendid indeed........

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Christina Smith 12 May 2009

tear cry, tears dry, thats life like the truth in your poem and the reality Very Good keep on writing and you'll get lots of fans on your work well done xx Chris xx

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Gutter Box 17 January 2009

Excellent write...you are a true poet...good job

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 September 2008

An poem with optimism, title is beautiful, concluding lines are nice. Love it,10++

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Mohammad Al-kurdi 29 March 2008

in one word 'there is hope ' every time you need.great message I Am who I Am and you write better than older and you know about the life also better...i wish you luck...

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Greenwolfe 1962 23 March 2008

What a great and universal message! GW62

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Hopeless places 22 March 2008

Very good poem! Very easy to read and people can relate. It is personal to write this type of poetry which touches the people that can relate.

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mar num 21 March 2008

hi.i just turned 14 in this month on the 7th, and i relate to this poem so well.ive been thro alot and every now n then think of it. but theres alwayz a wonder of tomorrow. this poem is so beatiful and soo true. i love it! ! ! write more, and see what you come up with. let ur mind wonder upon its self!

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Dislocated Heart 21 March 2008

well-writen. very nice. may one day those tears dry.. and happiness rise.

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