A Good Lover's Moon Left Alone Pale Lonely Shining Poem by Terence George Craddock

A Good Lover's Moon Left Alone Pale Lonely Shining

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walking in memories
roaming in restless woods
with the moonlight breaking

is wind silent waiting
a good time to sit to ponder
while inside heart shatters breaking

I fear in a romantic heart
a good lover's moon should
not be left alone pale lonely shining

feel the moonlight breaking
feel heart within shatter shaking
feel clay cast down fit for remaking

Thursday, October 8, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: lost love,love,moon,unrequited love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Copyright © Terence George Craddock
Written in December 2016 & October 2020 on the 17.12.2016 & 9.10.2020.
Inspired by the poem 'From 'To Seraphime' by the poet Heinrich Heine.
Dedicated to the poet Henrich Heine.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
L Milton Hankins 08 October 2020

Excellent poem written in tercets. I like that!

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