A Goodbye Poem by Sahar Sahar

A Goodbye

Rating: 5.0


When it was like a falling leave,
I remember, that goodbye,
The tears moved on,
my chilled cheeks,
death whispered to,
the falling leaf,
I am so cruel,
like nightmares,
taking no care,
Of your cry, ,
move and touch the ground
falling slowly,
Keeping ends,
with tale of sadness,
I wana wipe the tear,
With frozen hand,
while the sun sets,
in my eyes,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 December 2009

with tale of sadness, I wana wipe the tear, With frozen hand, while the sun sets, in my eyes, never say good bye even if situation demnadit... tearing farewellis the only answer forit... so nicepoemihavecome across....10 read minecry not.... bidding fare well... good bye... never say die

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Vijay Menon 08 October 2009

a very nice poem touching one indeed10+++

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Rafique Farooqi 01 October 2009

While the sun sets in my eyes......beautifully written poem 10++++++++

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