A Different Day Poem by Sahar Sahar

A Different Day

Rating: 5.0


This day.........,
Is not like other days,
I am thinking you,
In some different ways,
I am growing like,
a silent rage,
I am getting bigger,
Than your cage,
You think as,
your name is the best,
I think,
It is a just some wrong asset,
You think,
Things depend upon you,
I think it is not true.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 27 November 2009

wow what a poetic slam of thoughts my friend...nice to hear from you again in this site....Thanks for this short treat to us! ! ! Lovely! ! !

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 16 August 2010

‘You think, Things depend upon you, I think it is not true.’ A different thought with different meanings it’s indeed a different day [read thought] …nicely crafted of our folly of megalo ideas… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 09 December 2009

am getting bigger, Than your cage, You think as, your name is the best..................... yet beauty rambles over hued blue fragrance diffuses by the rungs of glow, wonderful write by imagery and metaphors, really superb,10++++, thanks for sharing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 December 2009

This day........., Is not like other days, I am thinking you, In some different ways, I am growing like, a silent rage, , , , if you think it is challange is each daythendefinitely it will make differencein your.. life.. each day bring new masage and you all worries go off... lovlely compbination.....10 read mine butterflies around...lovel's logical end

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Afzal Shauq 01 December 2009

again a wonderful poem with romantic way written.. lovely expressed and the verses are really interesting and meaningful..appreciate it..10/10

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 November 2009

nice write here! //.................

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