A Graduate Poem by ijlal haider

A Graduate

Rating: 4.3


to the coffin, from cradle
surpass sarcastic smiling hurdles
did i get, for what i was sent? ? ?
to learn, that i was meant.
Those shedding the shelters in sunshine
departing the dears who were mine
days and night without sleep
street and state i sweep
did it worth paid,
all those sacrifices i made? ? ? ?
Am i a graduate who could,
put the trust in the lord
bind the beloveds to the love's cord
turn down the thirsty sword red
welcome the guest with shared bread.
A graduate who could,
light a ray of knowledge,
find the wisdom way as life surge.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leslie Philibert 18 April 2014

A good poem that needs some work.

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Zhaleh Hour 18 April 2013

thanks, I really like it and add it to my poem list.

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Seema Chowdhury 09 February 2012

Ijlal, good and a thought provoming write. good luck and take care

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Vipins Puthooran 06 January 2012

A good poem! ! ! Really i like it! !

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Ramesh Rai 31 December 2011

NICE POEM A HAPPY NEW YEAR

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