Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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A Hate, Love Syndrome

Rating: 4.8

“Shut up, shut up, shut up and go away”
I threw the stone at crow to scare away
It was disturbing me with unpleasant voice
It was making me irritant with noise

I don’t know whether it was because of look
Appearance in early morning on hook
I couldn’t make out exact reason for dislike
Bird was on lovely earth flying like kite

Music leaves impact on blind and even on deaf
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Nagesh Ratnavelu 09 May 2010

ut up, shut up, shut up and go away” I threw the stone at crow to scare away It was disturbing me with unpleasant voice It was making me irritant with noise............very nice placement of words and indeed very true....10

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warner treuter 26 April 2010

Overall, poem seems to discern rightly, leaves that impression. For some unknown reason we all seem to find crows interesting. They seem rather otherworldly. Outdoorsy if nothing else. Kind of remarkable. Seems that many famous poets have written about them. And now you, too.

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Lady Grace 15 April 2010

this piece is nice...length cant destruct the meaning....well done...i want to quote this line..''shut up...shut up....'...actually, this expression made me think of my best friend here...sorrrrryyyyyyy for the words my dearest....i'll not say it again, promise... and this piece? ..of course...so nice...

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