Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 685,904 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

A Human To Human - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

How do the lies can help o develop our character? |
Can that serve in building our selves as better actor/
What type of shocks we have to bear thereafter?
Does that not bale our expectations and shatter?

We are piling number of excuses for all the matters
We never care for other’s sentiments and flatter
It has grown so deep in our blood
It has become routine and serves as nutritious food

It is tendency to become millionaire over night
We go on adopting any path whether it is wrong or right
We have only one goal and that is to cheat
We are least concerned about other’s fate

It is not new phenomena we are fight for
We have become expert in showing others an exit door
We are demeaning ourselves by becoming poor
We are claiming to be an intelligent creature and wrong doers

Great success with and more adding of lies
People are used to the new doze of supplies
They also know that it is routine to be duped
It has become vicious circled and perfectly looped

One can go to any extent without being punished
For him game has just started and yet not finished
The chances of its success might have diminished
It is still do or die approach for him to be perished

Well, this is how we pursue in our achievement
No one can offer us explanation or comments
It is solely for us to judge and take action
We helplessly watch the development without any reaction

The dooms day is not far off and may engulf us all
It is earnest desire, natural and divinity call
There may be slight deviation or standard fall
We should refrain from crating an impregnable wall

There is nothing like conscious call or truth
I may have an appeal and must help to soothe
It can do no more damage if resisted
The drive can thwarted if properly insisted


It may be great shame on humanity
Person may adopt unfair means with long continuity
It may serve his purpose with fine quality
There lies great factor like futility

We may go on in our practice unabated
You may not feel ashamed or regretted
There is reward for all lies and you may stand exposed
The trust which is thread bare may never be reposed

Let is rebuild lost reputation
There can be no equation
There can also be no question
It is human to human relation


Comments about A Human To Human by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (8/5/2010 9:14:00 PM)

    How do the lies can help o develop our character? |
    Can that serve in building our selves as better actor/
    What type of shocks we have to bear thereafter? ... good lines but difficult to answer....10
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  • Yoni Assis (5/21/2010 6:34:00 AM)

    This is kind of a combination of two pieces I wrote: Indictment and End Times. Some good lines. (Report)Reply

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  • (5/20/2010 10:20:00 PM)

    How do the lies can help o develop our character? |
    Can that serve in building our selves as better actor/
    What type of shocks we have to bear thereafter? .. it is shame os us to behav in such manner.....10
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 20, 2010



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