Saturday, October 1, 2016

A Kiss in Brussels Comments

Rating: 5.0

We stand here freezing in our winter coats,
a kiss prevents my breath from showing white,
my hand slows to a halt in mid caress,
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Benno Barnard
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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 January 2022

I cannot write this in a comment-space, so I tell it to you here oin this spot: Congratulations being chosen as The Poet Of The Day. Hoorray! ENJOY!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 January 2022

Great idea in this profound poem, very entertaining and aptly worded, well captured poem. Marvelous! 5 Stars full on TOP

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Maveriqué Richard 01 October 2016

Love this. Love the imagery, and the rhyme.

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M Asim Nehal 01 October 2016

A kiss in cold weather to ignite the heat is a fantastic idea....10+++

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