Selena Star

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A Kiss In The Rain-07 - Poem by Selena Star

He was at his friend Jay's house
And she was at her friend Alice's house
They were across the street from eachother, literally

He called her on the fone
She answered his call
They both decided to sneak out

He and Jay snuck out of the house
She and Alice snuck out of the house
They met up in the yard

He walked over to her
She stood there with open arms
They hugged for a little while

He put his jacket around her
She got comfortable in his arms
They stood there holding eachother

He felt a raindropp dropp on his face
She wiped the raindropp away
They stood there in the pouring rain

He asked Jay where they should go
She asked Alice the same
They decided to go under the tree in the back

He walked her towards the tree
She sat down on the ladderlike steps
They held eachother once more

He looked into her lightbrown eyes
She looked into his hazelgreen eyes
They got a little closer

He started kissing her neck
She lightly kissed his ear
They had their fun for a while

He turned as he heard a noise
She looked around to see who it was
They all looked around scared

He told Jay that someone was comming
She and Alice hid
They went to investigate

He saw that it was Jay's mom
She still hid with Alice
They never suspected Jay's mom to come out

He and Jay had to go inside
She and Alice walked back home
They had finished having fun

He called her again
She answered once more
They talked for a while

The next day...

He didn't call
She wouldn't answer
Their fun was only a one night stand

He didn't care
She didn't care
They went on living their lives

Comments about A Kiss In The Rain-07 by Selena Star

  • (1/21/2008 10:08:00 PM)

    wow... i really liked this a lot.... (Report)Reply

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  • (11/13/2007 6:13:00 PM)

    Gosh what a loser....alll that romantic kissess just for a one nite stand! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! but it was a good poem tho, it just made me mad cuz i thougth it was gonna end happily! ! ! ! ! : P (Report)Reply

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  • (11/13/2007 5:52:00 PM)

    AWSOME WRITE! ! ! it's hella cute. Great work. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/11/2007 10:35:00 PM)

    nawww, how cute... until i got to the end... I hate one night stands... especially when one of them gets their hopes up and ends up with shattered dreams... too bad it was a true story...

    Loves it tho star! ! love all ur poems lol... Kaila -xXx-

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  • (11/11/2007 10:31:00 PM)

    one sad song under heaven..a touch of melancholic rain. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 11, 2007

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 24, 2011

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