Thursday, May 25, 2006

A Ladylike Man In Monogyny Comments

Rating: 5.0

He drowned in a proposal marriage.
They were from opposite poles.
Happily hunting ground they do hanky-panky.
Bridegroom thinks of his former lovelorn lass
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nimal dunuhinga
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Duncan Wyllie 25 May 2006

Ummm! leaves me wondering, so many exist under such terms, very sad, hoping for a change in feeling Very profound Love Duncan X

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Brian Dorn 25 May 2006

Nimal, unfortunately, the state of many marriages... very well done! Brian

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Sandra Fowler 25 May 2006

A very sad poem filled with yearning and elusive dreams. This poem speaks to me in the language of sorrow. Kindest regards, Sandra

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