A Ladylike Man In Monogyny Poem by nimal dunuhinga

A Ladylike Man In Monogyny

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He drowned in a proposal marriage.
They were from opposite poles.
Happily hunting ground they do hanky-panky.
Bridegroom thinks of his former lovelorn lass
And the bride dreams of her brave archer.
They live forever under a one roof
Like obedient husband and wife.
After the litigation who will have the last laugh?

Thursday, May 25, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: hunting,husband,marriage
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 25 May 2006

Ummm! leaves me wondering, so many exist under such terms, very sad, hoping for a change in feeling Very profound Love Duncan X

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Brian Dorn 25 May 2006

Nimal, unfortunately, the state of many marriages... very well done! Brian

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Sandra Fowler 25 May 2006

A very sad poem filled with yearning and elusive dreams. This poem speaks to me in the language of sorrow. Kindest regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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