A Lament For Poems Not Written Poem by Terence George Craddock

A Lament For Poems Not Written

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but a brief lament
a lament for poems
lost never written

this brief poem
is but a lament
for all recent poems

poems I lost
choice never written
no effort made

poems dreamt free
I was drift waking
from sleep remembering

at this time sparkling
but not feeling fine
but choice not writing

due to lack of time
due to lack of finances
due to frustrations abundant

beautiful spectral poems
better than displayed these
better than residue posting

thus so often my best
are unwritten lade to rest
never to grace poetic pages

Saturday, November 8, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Poetry
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Split image from the poem 'Touchstone Revelation Hurled Cast Down', by the poet Terence George Craddock. Inspiration for the poems 'A Lament For All Poems', 'Lade Not Laid' and 'Not Writing Is Burden For Compulsive Poets', by the poet Terence George Craddock. Written in November 2014 on the 9.11.2014.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 08 November 2014

Thanks Kim, I first considered the implications of laid, but this laid implies finished; I felt lade has the implications of to burden or oppress, the oppressive burden of not writing for compulsive poets :)

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Terence Craddock 17 April 2023

I wrote the poem 'Not Writing Is Burden For Compulsive Poets', inspired by this comment.

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Terry Craddock 08 November 2014

Thanks for the comment Kim, I originally considered laid; but lade to me implies the burden oppression, the weight of not writing, an oppression burden for compulsive poets :)

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Terence Craddock 17 April 2023

I wrote the poem 'Lade Not Laid', inspired by this comment.

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Kim Barney 08 November 2014

Beautiful sentiments felt, I'm sure, by all poets at one time or another. I would change LADE to LAID. Keep writing. Let more of those poems escape!

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