Dear black Santa Claus I have some wish
it is not as many as the hair on
your head as a matter of fact the wish
is about hair, you see my friend Malik has turn
nineteen last summer and up to now his face
is as smooth as a baby butt without a lick
of hair, Oh! black Santa in your next phase
of trip and among your commodity of hair send malik
a beard, so that he won't be in despair
not that that is any business of mine and
please dear black Santa Claus don't show this letter
to Saint Nicholas your counterpart with the white beard
I don't want him to accidentally send Malik a white
beard because that will freak him out.
i love this poem it is very easy to read and understand and has humor/humour; i love humor also! ! i guess i've always had a " black Santa Claus" .....[note, i capitalize Claus; i don't know why you do not, ..and once you do not capitalize " santa" ].........as MY Santa always had a white beard. maybe he was just THAT old. i hope your friend got his (black, blue, green?) beard, NOT white! ! to MyPoemList. bri :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A much better poem than the first draft great write full of humour Well done