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A Line In The Sand

Rating: 4.9
I drew an ultimate
termination
line in the sand today

all these relatives
friends everyone
who rejects me

when they drew
their line in the sand
rejected my poetry

my line is a dagger
in the sand cut away
no more to say
Monday, September 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Writing
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Copyright © Terence George Craddock
Written in September 2014 on the 26.9.2014.
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COMMENTS
Miroslava Odalovic 30 September 2014
The decision has never been more simple. I loved the decsiive tone, it's all or nothing it is :)
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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 29 September 2014
You drew the line in sand but your poetry is not at all rejected. Your words speak wonder nature of your poem. Ever beautiful wording.
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