I drew an ultimate
resolute termination
line in the sand today
all these fake relatives
false friends everyone
who rabid rejects me
when they scorn drew
their line in the sand
rejected my pulse poetry
my line is a dagger
in the sand cut away
no more left to say
Terence George Craddock (Afterglows Echoes Of Starlight)
Copyright © Terence George Craddock
You drew the line in sand but your poetry is not at all rejected. Your words speak wonder nature of your poem. Ever beautiful wording.
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The decision has never been more simple. I loved the decsiive tone, it's all or nothing it is :)