A Lovely Poem For You Poem by Thampi KEE

A Lovely Poem For You

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once I peep inside
on a deep shadow night
and we must
keep it like a cock drink
and we never love it
but once you hate it katee
I feel you a dancing mood

and that night
I walk out of her shadow light
and want to keep you be free
you may steal my heart katee
and I guess it to read and your sweet look
and I wish to write my poem again here
you drink this night and we share it... free...
this must not be of our lov
I steal your drink and peep your door
You may guess it to write.......

''What does it mean what does it mean''
you shiver at night
Your wallet not holds my slim photo?
You not come each place I may not go
and seems to have much better if we are share again
We light one candles and like to stay up night
and wish to kiss
and I write this for you dear

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sabitha S Geethall 13 May 2011

a romantic poem, beautifully narates d wishes, , when a soul fall in love, , thank you..

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Marieta Maglas 14 May 2011

well conceived lyric poem, thank you for sharing

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Subrat Pradhan Love-immortal 04 September 2012

that is love. well written. try reading my love poems as well.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 06 May 2014

very well done...i really enjoyed this poem!

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 September 2013

Wow. Wonderful Romantic poem. Beautifully presented. Loved reading it.

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Valsa George 07 December 2012

You and your loved one sitting in the dim candle light with the time standing still and life unfolding before you with the sweetness of a dream! A very romantic poem!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 30 November 2012

A nice lovely poem for your love deep down from the heart. Well written for her!

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Neela Nath Das 28 November 2012

It seems your thinking aloud like Robert Browning's poet-hero. Nice!

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