A Maidens Prayer Poem by ivor or ivor.e hogg

A Maidens Prayer

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I was naïve I trusted you,
just as you always meant me to.
You were convincing when you lied
but when your lust was satisfied.
You wanted nothing more to do
with me. You said that we were through…

I hope your conscience bothers you
I really think it ought to do.
One day you’ll get your fingers burned.
Your chosen victim will have learned
To take her vengeance out on you
for something that you did not do.

Some lying lover just like you
deceived her, broke her heart in two.
Then merrily went on his way.
There always comes a reckoning day.
I only hope I’m there to see
you pay for what you did to me.

18-Dec-08

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 09 September 2010

I like it Ivor, You said it for a good many people. Adeline

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They say revenge is sweet, so is this maidens prayer, be it, sweet revenge unto her! Interesting poem, enjoyed the read; D

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 20 April 2009

this is a marvelous poem my friend.. greatly done and well expressed

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Christine Kerr 27 February 2009

This one hit so close to my heart, What a Keeper

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Ron Flowers 27 December 2008

Well penned Ivor. Regards Ron

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Hebburn.Co Durham U.K
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