A Meeting Poem by Irina Doichinova

A Meeting

Rating: 5.0


And when we met
In the naked forest
The night failed
To mask the brightness
Flaring our invisible eyes.

There was the moon,
Ghastly peering through -
A smeared face of silver.
We failed to vanish -
You saw me,
And I saw you.

You were wrapped in silence,
Abandonment and solitude.
Like a flame of sadness
Your shadow passed me by.

In the naked forest
Where we met
Dusk was falling discreetly.
Branches bare and black
Pierced the crisp air.

Blushing, a crimson shadow,
I leaned beside a tree.
Something was burning -
I saw you,
And you saw me.

Cold gush of air -
A stroke on my cheek.
Hiding in the warmth of my hair
I watched you floating away.

A flame of sadness,
Crimson shadow beside a tree,
A ghastly silver face
Peering through bare branches -
The moon, the forest and we.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rick Adriolo 04 February 2013

You're a real talent! amazing poem! 10+

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Hristina Veleva 03 January 2013

Thanks for the comment and the vote, Howard. It was very encouraging!

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Howard Johnson 03 January 2013

Enjoyed reading this pleasurable piece thank you for sharing

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