Two minds in sync
Have forged a link
One single thought
By two hearts caught;
You read my mind
And then unwind
My tangled thoughts
Connect my dots;
How clever this
Your honest bliss
Has touched my heart
Right from the start;
Reflecting me
You helped me see
A kindred soul
You made me whole.
Magical rhythm. Couldn't be better. I really enjoyed this piece.
really a wonderful poem evoking the synchrinisation of two minds and souls resourced from dichotomous smiles, great write, i like it,10+, thanks for sharing yet with kind regards
The pieces fit - like a jigsaw - in this superb poem about an extraordinary synchronicity that can occur between certain individuals. There are some people in life whose very presence gives one inspiration - to create, to solve problems, to go beyond the ordinary. You are lucky to have met such a one and the resultant expression of the experience is beautifully constructed. A work of art. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Another beauty Linda, I love the first line 'Two minds in sync', I truly like the feel of it. Melvina
A nice one Linda.I could write such a poem but unfortunatly my world has unravelled completely. Sid x.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Talk about being in sync! 4 Stanzas of 4 Lines of 4 Syllables Now, Midnight...Take a close look at the design of my breakdown of your poetic structuring.... That''' E ''stands for Excellent, young lass! And that applies to the storyline to boot! Frank/FjR